“It is so easy to be immature. If I have a book to serve as my understanding, a pastor to serve as my conscience, a physician to determine my diet for me, and so on, I need not exert myself at all.…
  • aCosmicWave@lemm.eeEnglish
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    7 months ago

    I’m conflicted. I really appreciated the quote at the beginning but the actual article seems so poorly written. Grammatical errors, run-on sentences, etc. Gave up half way through.

      • Victor@lemmy.worldEnglish
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        6 months ago

        Your English is fine. Sentences may be a tad long, and of course an article this size would need a proofread before posting. That’s normal.

        Very interesting article, at least in the beginning. I didn’t get very far but I was intrigued from the start. I like how you framed it all the way you did. Well done. 🙂👍